2 first songs ive made

[skatenike]

i just got mixcraft yesterday and i started messin around with it and made 2 songs since then

obviously they arent that good cause ive never made songs before this but tell me what you guys think

-criticism
-comments
-complements?

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=413523116

both songs are on that link

[cosimo84]

a lil too old skool for me

[Slypieguy]

needs more climax

[skatenike]

needs more climax

thats what she said ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

eh i had to say it

[emasame]

audiodaze is quite similar sounding to audioslave.

and yea, those 80s/90s sounds are kind of outdated

the beginning of I5 wasnt as oldschool, the violin thing was pretty nice.

[Scully]

thats what she said ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Who said?

[Tomaj]

ya you need ALOT of work, but there better than some other first songs ive heard. with some practice you could get really good with it.

[skatenike]

audiodaze is quite similar sounding to audioslave.

and yea, those 80s/90s sounds are kind of outdated

the beginning of I5 wasnt as oldschool, the violin thing was pretty nice.

well yeah but i hate almost all new rap (i hate lil wayne and sean kingston and all that crap and the beats are horrible) so if it sounds oldschool thats kinda like a compliment to me

thanks for the input

[shnedit]

I cannot describe in words how easy it is to produce this shit.

Other than that good show, id dance around to it off my face after 5 E's.

[alfaroverall]

...pretty awful imo. Sorry, I just see no redeeming qualities in this whatsoever.

[Spinewire]

I cannot describe in words how easy it is to produce this shit.

Other than that good show, id dance around to it off my face after 5 E's.
hahaha

...pretty awful imo. Sorry, I just see no redeeming qualities in this whatsoever.

are you saying you could do better?

[skatenike]

I cannot describe in words how easy it is to produce this shit.

Other than that good show, id dance around to it off my face after 5 E's.

yeah i gotta agree its really easy to do it but i think as far as that goes some people have a good ear for music and some dont so as it easy to make a coherent song it doesnt always mean they sound good to the ear

[alfaroverall]

are you saying you could do better?
I'm saying that I'd rather compose in a medium more interesting to me, such as that created by Finale Notepad, and have done so on a small scale. If you'd like a sample I can host one up.

[Barbarossa]

My Fuckin' Ears!!!!

[Spinewire]

i might download this and have a play

I'm saying that I'd rather compose in a medium more interesting to me, such as that created by Finale Notepad, and have done so on a small scale. If you'd like a sample I can host one up.

Do it!

[skatenike]

I'm saying that I'd rather compose in a medium more interesting to me, such as that created by Finale Notepad, and have done so on a small scale. If you'd like a sample I can host one up.

post it here i wanna hear it
itll be easier to tell where your commin from then

[Fringe]

I'm digging it... you might have a future in music my friend! If you don't let Darkfall take over your life :P

[alfaroverall]

I don't have a myspace and don't intend to make one...anyone have a better way to upload music?

[DR.NUMBERS]

I don't have a myspace and don't intend to make one...anyone have a better way to upload music?

Format?

[Lioness]

My Fuckin' Ears!!!!

Gosh Barbara you're so mean...

Anyways, It's okay. :) I give it a 5.5/10. Not really my style.

But keep workin' at it! You've got somethin' goin'. ;)

[Drunkenork]

From what I noticed you have a good foundation, but the same repetitive melody gets expressed a little too much. Gj!

[alfaroverall]

Format?
Midi, though .mus (the format that finale saves in) tends to work better. But it doesn't play outside of finale notepad.

[skatenike]

Midi, though .mus (the format that finale saves in) tends to work better. But it doesn't play outside of finale notepad.

use a file hosting site

[skatenike]

still waiting

[Barbarossa]

Gosh Barbara you're so mean...

Anyways, It's okay. :) I give it a 5.5/10. Not really my style.

But keep workin' at it! You've got somethin' goin'. ;)

I got your barbara...:sly:

That kind of 'whatever' is horrid, it's basically noise set to a bad recycled disco beat.

I've given positive responses to every members music posted on these forums before.

This was my first negative response ever.

[skatenike]

I got your barbara...:sly:

That kind of 'whatever' is horrid, it's basically noise set to a bad recycled disco beat.

I've given positive responses to every members music posted on these forums before.

This was my first negative response ever.

hahah yes im a trend setter

[arcas]

i just got mixcraft yesterday and i started messin around with it and made 2 songs since then

obviously they arent that good cause ive never made songs before this but tell me what you guys think

-criticism
-comments
-complements?

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=413523116

both songs are on that link

hmm try to make sound with fruity loops ! :D

[skatenike]

hmm try to make sound with fruity loops ! :D

i dont like fruity loops