I wrote a poem.

[Surly]

angry hands meet just service
freedom comes to soon for one so long a sin
trapped in a fortress feeling as if norm
can destroy the demon
unleash you strong
cannot accept fate as is
I will save you
this I promise
this battle not to be sung
to keep so i do not insure
to sink as low as this rachete foe
family he claims but by blood this only true
but actions show nothing but a demented shrew


Poll not related.

[Beeblebrox]

Holy shit am I high again?

Also: first! Can I play with the Big H now?

[Surly]

Yes.

[Beeblebrox]

LOL this is the Best dream ever! I just hope I don't wake up...

[paade]

tl;dr

[Reikson]

how did you get a picture of my wife surly?

[BlackDawg]

When no ones around trees dont fall...duh...and I dont like the new sig Surly, just puting that out there.

[Surly]

When no ones around trees dont fall...duh...and I dont like the new sig Surly, just puting that out there.
That's funny because Raven Rose Pack let me in the guild with this sig. :( Why the sudden hate?

[BlackDawg]

Why the sudden hate?

Because I can.

[Beeblebrox]

That's funny because Raven Rose Pack let me in the guild with this sig. :( Why the sudden hate?

Well who wouldn't want a hottie like that in their guild?

[Surface]

Knew I had read this before....

http://emo-poems.greatestjournal.com/

Good to see another forumfaller is a emo-poems.com community member :).

[Kietharr]

needs more ebony raven darkness blackitude and other ways of describing how your heart feels.

Also, not enough nihilism. Try harder if you want to keep that sig!

[Carl Ragadamn]

Knew I had read this before....

http://emo-poems.greatestjournal.com/

Good to see another forumfaller is a emo-poems.com community member :).

I can see you and surly being best friends.

[fizz65]

how bout this
You rawred at me
I look at you
you climb in bed
I held your hand
you smile at me
I kiss your hand
You fall asleep
the night has peaked
dare we speak?

Glance around
Don't make a sound
Laugh away
these crazy days
please don't frown
I don't want you down
Hold you tight
when your full of fright
never out of sight
you're my light

[Surly]

Knew I had read this before....

http://emo-poems.greatestjournal.com/

Good to see another forumfaller is a emo-poems.com community member :).Yeah... I wrote all of those.

The fact that it is the first google result for "emo poems" is just testament to the power of my words, and the flocks that they attract... like black ravens, circling around the grave.

[omnigol]

Poetry is a mockery of humanity.

[Surly]

Poetry is a mockery of humanity.
How poetic!

[Beeblebrox]

It looks like the fattie is trying to eat the wolf in that sig.

[Lindorn]

freedom comes to soon for one so long a sin
trapped in a fortress feeling as if norm

This part really spoke to me. Freedom does indeed come to soon...for all of those people out there who are so long a sin. I mean....when I speak these words they have so much more meaning to me. And this fortress he speaks of.....I too have been feeling as if norm lately. It's like this guy knows the depths of my very soul. I bet he paints his fingernails black too.


errr, to rather.

[Leonon]

Surly? What have they done to you Surly?
/e cries



Where is the drunkard with an implausible hatred for womenkind I once read the rantings of so long ago?

[Voodoo Hoodoo]

angry hands meet just service
freedom comes to soon for one so long a sin
trapped in a fortress feeling as if norm
can destroy the demon
unleash you strong
cannot accept fate as is
I will save you
this I promise
this battle not to be sung
to keep so i do not insure
to sink as low as this rachete foe
family he claims but by blood this only true
but actions show nothing but a demented shrew


Poll not related.


Poem with no grammatical check = waste of time.

Back to primary school for you young (wo)man.

[Beeblebrox]

Poem with no grammatical check = waste of time.

Back to primary school for you young (wo)man.

Surly is not a woman...yet.

[Shads]

The Dark Side is strong in the OP.

PS Hot SotA womenz!!

[Kraven]

In Texas we don't take kindly to *** ass gay-queer-o-sexuals.

[Feyrband]

Good to see another forumfaller is a emo-poems.com community member :).

no

[Pcheez]

This thread sparks pity.
Rageful Pity.

[Largion]

seriously a poem?
You are starting to scare me.

[Hitom]

Seriously, Surly turned emo, Viluin turned panzy.
Im just waiting for Matriel to turn into a gun hating hippie.

[Dredgon]

.

That wasn't gay!
You dare write poetry and not be gay? Ashame.

[Lejar]

I can make a poem too.

Sitting in a bush with 20X optical zoom,
Watching you change into pajamas in your bedroom,
Slowly excited I begin to move towards your door,
With the key I stole from your purse, boy were you sore,
You don't know I'm here, but I've known you all along,
Watching you from accross the room while you play beer pong,
Soon we'll be together, please don't make a sound,
If anyone catches on I'll have to make sure we're never found,
With my reflection in your beautiful eyes,
I will never tell you any lies,
With my hands around your supple neck,
Before I met you I was such a wreck,
I love you.

[BlackVolgan]

i found a bag of salt
i punched a goat in the throat
i jumped off a building
and landed in a pile of shit

[Lejar]

i found a bag of salt
i punched a goat in the throat
i jumped off a building
and landed in a pile of shit

That's pretty good. But I was hoping that someone would comment on mine before I go to work. :p Ah well... my old English teacher doesn't like them... but it's okay I still love her.

[BlackVolgan]

I can make a poem too.

Sitting in a bush with 20X optical zoom,
Watching you change into pajamas in your bedroom,
Slowly excited I begin to move towards your door,
With the key I stole from your purse, boy were you sore,
You don't know I'm here, but I've known you all along,
Watching you from accross the room while you play beer pong,
Soon we'll be together, please don't make a sound,
If anyone catches on I'll have to make sure we're never found,
With my reflection in your beautiful eyes,
I will never tell you any lies,
With my hands around your supple neck,
Before I met you I was such a wreck,
I love you.


ok thats fucking creepy... but i like it :P

[Lejar]

ok thats fucking creepy... but i like it :P

Why thank you. ^^ I made it up all by myself, lol. Although I did get some insperation from MXPX's The Mixed Tape.

Edit: Oh and I noticed that the last line rhymes with my sig. :p

[Titus Ultor]

wtf.

How did this become a thread for actual "poems"?

FORUMFALL YOU HAVE FAILED ME YET AGAIN.

[Jonkar]

That's actually a pretty hot chick in your sig, Surly.

[Weeking]

There once was a creature from Roswell
that used to hang around forumfall
writing not so well
and speaking not at all

It posted a poem self-made
but it had an O missing
and that's not well-made
and they felt like dissing

Poor Surly felt sad
because it was not all bad
and the flames were burning
telling it to do some learning

-Weeking,23.07.08 11:30-11:37 GMT

[Baenor]

I should read off topic more often.

Is it just me...

or should I be saying

"Fuck you Surly" right now?

Just don't anal probe me, k?

wtf.

How did this become a thread for actual "poems"?

FORUMFALL YOU HAVE FAILED ME YET AGAIN.

Sorry I didn't read it earlier.

[lemmingsoup]

As regards the poll, one must define sound to answer the question. Are you asking whether the tree creates sound as a wave of motion (a primary quality in the matter around the event) or sound as a perceived secondary quality (requiring an observer) please be aware that what you say can easily be interpreted in a number of ways.

[Slisk]

Don't despair Surly, Xinro will be there to catch you on the rebound.

[Athan.F]

I wonder...

[Barbarossa]

If a tree falls in the forest and no one is around to hear it, does it make a sound?

Hmmm.

For this crowd that may be too profound a statement.

"The chicken or the egg, which came first?" would have made a less confusing poll for the forumfall crowd, which the greatest percentage of these days are of kids out of school for summer vacation.

[Spinewire]

Surly is not a woman...yet.
She is my special little girl and i will take good care of her...

*Strokes her hair*

[Weeking]

Hmmm.

For this crowd that may be too profound a statement.

"The chicken or the egg, which came first?" would have made a less confusing poll for the forumfall crowd, which the greatest percentage of these days are of kids out of school for summer vacation.

It makes sound by falling, but how can you quantify (count) sound? I'd say it is probably much more than one sound.

The egg came way before the chicken. Because by chicken it is usually meant a young bird. Dinosaurs laid eggs and eggs with no hard shell around was around way before that again. On the other hand, an egg cannot come, but a chicken might respond in that way if you rape it, I dunno.

[Barbarossa]

On the other hand, an egg cannot come, but a chicken might respond in that way if you rape it, I dunno.

The voice of experience, perhaps? I think I may have a new sig in the wings....

[Surly]

There is a lot of creativity in this thread, you guys are the best.

[Lorthral]

Yes.

Nice new sig Surly!!!

[Agge]

Yes ofcourse it makes soundwaves.

Don't expect anything funny to be written here.

[HorrorHotel]

Yes ofcourse it makes soundwaves.

Don't expect anything funny to be written here.

Technically, it isn't sound if it isn't perceived. Of course, there would be sound waves, but not sound.

[Agge]

Technically, it isn't sound if it isn't perceived. Of course, there would be sound waves, but not sound.

Isthatafactnow?

[Mordhak]

Way to be an even bigger attention whore than Viluin and Xinnro combined.

[Lachrymose]

Technically, it isn't sound if it isn't perceived. Of course, there would be sound waves, but not sound.

i was going to prove you wrong, so i turned to webster. this is what he said:

the sensation perceived by the sense of hearing

you win. :(

[Lejar]

She is my special little girl and i will take good care of her...

*Strokes her hair*

You like your girls like you like your whiskey?

[Surly]

Way to be an even bigger attention whore than Viluin and Xinnro combined.
Thanks.

[Kaorn]

Haha, this is just pure gold, nice...

I applaud you Surly