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Arathor
07-22-2008, 03:31 AM
(Hi all, I read a lot about your storys and I want to try it, I'm not very good at english but I'll do my best )

My name is Vaiwallas, a poor lonesome orphan coming from the shores of Oghre bay south of Mirendil. I've seen a lot of Alfar in my long life, too many, these killing machines have too many times attacked the villages and devasted the forests of my beautiful homeland. They killed my family and so many of my friends. That's not their fault, they think to do the best thing for their peoples as Melek said to them. This tyran have wash their brains and it's time for me now to make the things change, I'll do my best to change the minds of the Alfars and make them follow the rules of the Mirdains by using diplomacy. We will not successfuly assimilate them by force and I got to do something now, too many mirdains and alfars have died in these wars.

Day one:

After a long travel on Mirendil, I've reach the limits of my lands to the east and reaching West of Mercia and North-east of Nagast. I followed my path to the south in the limit of Mercia, the Alfar of the east are more full of hatred toward the Mercians than the Mirdains and maybe I will be able to find a wounded Alfar in a battle and save his life before he died. By doing this, I could hope that he respect me enough to talk to me without wanting to killing me.

After a while, I've seen dust in the air from far away <<what is it?>> I thought. I've start to run to see what happen in front of me and I noticed a golden beast running at something who looks like a humanoid, when I got closer I said to myself <<no, I should leave this place right now>>, what I saw in front of me is two female lions attacking a black lord, I've foughts lions long time ago but I did'nt know if my arrows are strong enough to pierce a black lord armour.

During the time I looked at this fight, I've heard something at my left. At this time I was not stalking <<what a mistake I said to myself>> I hoped it was not alfars who found me during my absent-mindedness. When I turned my head, what I saw was not what I thought about. A Mercian!!

Hail Mirdain, what's your name?

Vaiwallas: Hi human, I'm Vaiwallas, a traveller, and you?

gurinthedark
07-22-2008, 04:22 AM
Nice story. But next time us "" instead of <<>> for quotation marks. Makes it looks neat and doesn't distract you from the story.

Arathor
07-22-2008, 04:26 AM
Nice story. But next time us "" instead of <<>> for quotation marks. Makes it looks neat and doesn't distract you from the story.

Ok ty ^^

Arathor
07-22-2008, 08:44 AM
The mercian: I'm Faraseth, a patroller, I'm here to prevent the Alfars to cross our lines. I did'nt see any of them passing over here since 3 months and what I see? A mirdain passing the border HaHaHa, I'm supposed to attack everyone not a Human over here but I think I'll do an exception for you.

Vaiwallas: I did'nt pass the border, I travelled from Mirendil till here but I will pass the border if things go right.

Faraseth: Why would you pass this border to go to die?

Vaiwallas: I'm not going there to fight with the alfars.

Faraseth: HaHaHa, do you really think they gonna let you enter their land like this? The alfar have no pity, they are evil to the core especially the guardians of their borders.

Vaiwallas: I know more than you think how evil they can be but I'm sure that there is good in every peoples in Agon.

Faraseth: ...

We were so concentrate in our discussion that we forgot the fight near to us, and we both heared the sound of the Black lord ,that seems to have finished his work with the lions, running on us. I've almost had the time to grab my bow and an arrow when I heared the sword of Faraseth crushing the armor of the Black Lord, "forgot the bow" I said to myself, so I grabed my daggers and running on the back of the Black Lord. Unfortunately, it seems that it's not the day where I'll see if I can beat one of these beast because Faraseth killed him before I could do anything. For a moment, I said to me that I was lucky not to be an Alfar because Faraseth was definitively a great fighter, I've seen a lot of Mercian in my life but this one was the best I've ever seen.

Vaiwallas: Take his armor, you deserve it my friend.

Faraseth: I'm not here for that, I just serve my country. But take whatever you want on him if it interrest you.

Vaiwallas: Hmmm, I don't like his black armour and I don't use axes, so I'll leave him alone.

Faraseth: As you wish, so... what you were talking about before this little fight? ...you said you want to enter the Nagast land? What do you want to do there if it's not to kill Alfars? These lands are almost as ugly as them you know?

"How can I say to a Mercian that I want to make friends with the alfars, the Mercians have no idea about diplomacy, they are warriors."

Vaiwallas: I... want to spy them because they are quiet since a few months on Mirendil too and we are sure that they plan something.

Faraseth: But why don't you cross there lines from Mirendil for that?

Vaiwallas: ...Just because the Alfars guardians on the Mirendil border are more trained to detect stalking than here.

Faraseth: I see. Good luck my friend, I hope you will find what you are looking for in these lands, take care of yourself.

Vaiwallas: Thank you, take care.