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Ammon777
01-01-2008, 12:25 PM
Here I submit a challenge to anyone creative enough to invent/write rhymes, song lyrics, or prose about any lore that you might invent for Darkfall or our own planet Earth. Fantasy themes are preferred, I guess. The following is a sort of black metal song lyric that I came up with today. Please do these as serious attempts and save your flaming and joking for Off-Topic section of the forums, please. I am curious to see what some of you might come up with. Thanks. Note that I am not a very good musician and I am not good enough musician to make a band (nor am I inclined to do it) so I might as well put this out into the world somewhere before its lost in the obscurity of my mind... Please do not plagiarize here, that would be useless.

DUST OF DAYS [black metal song lyrics]

Ancient memory woke its spirit,
sleeping for so very long,
twisted roots burgeoned with rage,
angry inner life encouraged,
the great tree surged with the might of ages.

Its roots burst from soil,
driving through layers of earth, to air,
with profound mirth,
braced against the earth,
strength lifts the entire mass of tree.

Rise up and move over land, and flee,
for once old world is now raped,
by creatures of ill-mind -- spread as many --
breeders that take without returning, hostile to other lives,
spirits of the forest fall away into Night.

Driven away, back and away,
nursing their wounds, a crying song,
"the Olde Ways are gone,"
oaths once taken are lost to time,
druid protectors are decayed with the dust of days.

daan16
01-01-2008, 01:35 PM
Childrens of now, Warriors in the future.

The childrens from now,
Warriors in the future,
Don't know what they can expect,
But think it's the best for them,

Father's told their sons this is your destiny,
Mothers begging fathers if there cant be any other way,
But the fathers decide so no discussion,
The fathers saying there is no other solution,

World is getting hard thats just a fact,
Fathers prepare the children for that impact,
Making from their sons real man,
Hoping their sons come back again,

and says: Father, Thank you for making me a real man.


lol i just wrote what i thought don't blame me if u think its bad. Its the best i can :P i just thought why not lets just give it a try :)

Galadon
01-01-2008, 08:26 PM
I am the winged crusader; hear my cry!

In love I am Seraphim; three-winged protector
In life I am Raven; dark but noble
In battle I am Eagle; free, strong, and brave
In death I am songbird; for my tale shall be known.

I am the winged crusader, hear my cry!



[*Shudders at the cheesyness]

WickedSpades
01-01-2008, 10:11 PM
Forecast the shadow for it's slow to relax
It's hard for me to be so slow to react
The harmony that's justice to me
It's flowing free screaming, "liberty!"

Welcome to the new year 2008
Will the tides turn and commemorate?
It's sick and twisted the words of honor
I wish I could go back and relapse when I faulter

Don't tell me of a resolution
I dream like V of a day of revolution
A vivid imagination for a course of the future
I strongly agree that it's short term for me

Reggae gets me by with the short beats to a measure
I relapse the good times and my heart beat with pleasure
I wish I could forget all I did wrong
That's why I'm stuck here for so damn long

Let me be who I want to be
Stand strong stand tall and waiting for all
Let me stand in the rain to complain
Just to be cold hearted every day

I want to be somebody in the end
Where can I go and try to comprehend
I need time for me to hold on
Like I stop watch and I watch it get old

Bustin' rhymes like a wax termite
I fly high with a mind of a candle light
Let me go with a new resolution
Be like V with a brand new revolution

I wish you all a happy new year
Let it be a chance to down your beer!
One more word I would like from you all
Stand up tall and say your "cheers!"

Made up in under ten minutes.

Ammon777
01-02-2008, 01:36 PM
Good work, guys :D

sc0r0wnz
01-12-2008, 08:33 PM
How long is this song going to be? 30 couplets?