Introduction suggestions

[Dreous]

I'm "decently" new to making Introductions.. But I've almost completely finished one that I think its pretty cool. Some stuff such as Sound and blending of colors or even colors on some things all together ( An alfar I made in there ) Are incomplete.. So just disregard that for now :P.. ( I'm pretty much worthless in photoshop :P )

Anyways It would be nice if I could get some feedback from it. Since my guildies never say much more then thats Nice!... Suggestions, rating, Criticism, ect.. Are welcome. I don't much mind.


www.underworldassailants.com **UNFINISHED**

( I also understand I've not put a "preloader" so just wait a second for it ;P.. Its only 400kb )

[VidarDf]

looks good

[TizzyFoe]

thats nice

[Komako]

Flash?

[Arty]

Love the idea.

Will you be adding a soundtrack?

The tagline is great. :)

[Aranin]

i think u need to use some photoshop or a diff program to smooth out that alfar image, needs to be blened.

take the iomages used on the face, make a duplicate of the eye's pick then merge all the layers on the face besides the copy. desaturate then alter the hue/sat or create a colour balance to get the colour and then place the eye layer below the face and delete the eyes on the desat layer to get the red eye's use blurr and also fade out on the cut sections images to make them smoother.

doing little things like that will just make it look so much better in the long run.

otherwas good idea, coming along well.

[Dreous]

The Alfar image I'm using atm is a picture of a model that I made in 3d Studio Max since there really wasn't any good pictures of alfars to use.. I didn't add any skin on the Model either so its just basic greyish with some photoshop darkening..

[Dreous]

Small Update.. Added a couple of things.. Few different sound effects. New "Dagger" Animation death instead of the fireball thing at the end.. I think this looks a bit cooler.. * took out the Fade out atm.. Since I plan on added like a Red "blood" fade out type of screen *

www.underworldassailants.com

[alfaroverall]

Woot for dreous's hard work paying off!

[Dreous]

Felt like throwing this up again.. I updated some stuff.. Added DF ss's in it.. Except for the last one :P * if anyone knows a good ss from DF showing the sky give me a Pm :) * ... Took some advise from Aranin to make more detail on the alfar model.. ( put a song in it.. Made it a bit big, Thinking about changing it to something a bit smaller )

Came up with - http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b378/Ian_Canida/alfar1copy.gif


Just the face so far.. Going to be messing with making the body a little bit better. ( Recommend putting your hands over the body and it looks nicer :P )

*Intro - http://www.underworldassailants.com

[Dreous]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b378/Ian_Canida/alfar1copy-3.gif

Made some better looking "armor" Not that great but its better none the less..