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Jemal
09-26-2009, 12:02 PM
I have been working on my own storyline based on what AV has given for a lore and adding to it.

This is the introduction to the story and was wondering what people's feedback was to it. I have started on Chapter 1, but have no promises when I'll finish it; however, I'll try to have it soon, expectially for those that want it.

Introduction

Most Mercians feel surreal with the war ending between them and the Alfars. Many are uncomfortable with the little peace that has come. To the Chillbournians of Mercia, this is even greater. There village now borders the Alfar's newly aquired land. Some Chillbournians don't want to leave even in it's current state, believing it admits defeat while others don't know where to go. Those that admit it, say the war ended 8 months ago when King Seddish signed The Treaty of Silence to end The War of Blood. A conterversial call with some unsure in the security of there kingdom.

Resistances such as the Brotherhood of Mercia have formed in recent months; however, recruitment has been diffucult, since King Seddish declared attacks against the Alfars unlawful outside Mercia's borders for fear of provoking another war. While all citizens of Mercia feel pinned from all direction, many are unsure what to do.

Chapter 1 soon to come.

Jemal

ZtyX
10-27-2009, 02:55 AM
He this is a pretty nice story. Hmm, I wonder what will happen in the next parts of your story.

Also, is this based on actual events in the game in mercia and what people are doing there? I live on Yssam, so I don't know much about events in Chillbourne.

I was actually in Chillbourne a month ago and it seemed humans were confidently in control of the area.. it was not as unsafe and dangerous as a year ago.

Captain Kirk
10-28-2009, 11:14 AM
Awesome, we need more Lore and Rp in darkfall!

Keep it up, waiting for the first chapter! :D

Raeyzej
10-28-2009, 04:45 PM
If the devs wont make lore, then we can make it for ourselves.

I like it, keep it up. I used to live out of Chillbourne and this seems pretty much accurate.

Also, if this is actual account of what is going on in game, which server?

Gray Fox
10-28-2009, 06:31 PM
Yeya nice

syryel
10-29-2009, 02:19 AM
You may want to add the religious/magical parts of the story, since the Alfar have a living/active god.

And, umm, the spelling mistakes tend to take my mind off the story when I read your intro.

Jemal
10-31-2009, 11:43 PM
I'm glad to see others taking an interest in the story. :)

I have put some time into chapter one already; however, I will be putting even more, with the feedback I have been getting.

I apprecitate all the comments good or bad and hope it will be ready soon.

Thanks,
Jemal

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