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Geminireaper
04-21-2006, 10:23 PM
As I crossed the cobblestone street I began to focus on my objective. I noticed the damp chill air that sprang forth from the late afternoon spring rain. I noticed my shadow dancing as I passed under the oil street lamp and in the distance I heard the first sign of the wolves beginning there night hunt. Here it was, the place I had been looking for and inside my objective. Assassin by profession, however I
Raybur Ravenloc
04-21-2006, 10:55 PM
very nice
LanMandragon
05-06-2006, 01:32 AM
Not a bad first try.
If you want actual criticism like writing wise, I can do that, but somepeople dont want that.
Good read though.
LilWower44
05-11-2006, 01:36 AM
very nice
lol
RavenLord
05-11-2006, 01:01 PM
lol
lol
Raybur Ravenloc
05-11-2006, 05:07 PM
lol
would you prefer:
"eat shit and die, bitch.."?
Geminireaper
05-12-2006, 05:48 PM
Hey stop hijacking my thread damnit :bang: Sorry I havent written more...for some reason they are making me do actual work at work lately :bang:
Raybur Ravenloc
05-12-2006, 06:31 PM
lol, sry, i'm done.. yeah, who are they to tell you to work just because they pay you...
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