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LilWower44
03-03-2006, 03:32 PM
once there was a legendary evil human assasin, who was hated by everyone... he had a house in the highlands and worked all day as a farmer.
"Danm these swams of bugs, always eating my crops, this is the last time its going to happen, im moving to the city." so he migrated to a big city with all of the stuff he had. he worked outside of the city as a lumberjack, one day he found a mystical glowing sword... then he heard someone approach behind him "who are you" said the lumberjack, the man replied "your life will end now, you are the one who stole my mystical sword" the lumberjack replied "i did not steal it here you can have it if you want!! dont kill me please i will do anything" the man replied "it is too late you will die NOW!!!" the lumberjack reacted to stick his magical sword out to defend himself, one second later the man who was trying to kill the lumberjack was dead, he had been caught on the sword that peirced through his stomache. the man went back to the city and told his story. soon the king their heard about what he had done and hierd him to be an assasin (hit-man) for him. the man could not refuse. the king asked of his name and he replied, i have many names farmer, lumberjack, or just Muriadin. the king replied "muriadin ehh? Ok muriadin i need you to go to the city of Astrius, which is 3miles north of us and assasinate the king their, the man accepted.

Ok so pretty much this is a story about a human farmer who goes to the city and finds a job as a lumbrjack, finds a magical sword and kills an assasin with it. he goes back to the city and gets a job as a hit-man(assasin) for the king of the city, now he has to leave for a quest to kill the king of the rival city of the one he is in.

LilWower44
03-03-2006, 03:39 PM
please post here =D no retarted posts tho

RavenLord
03-03-2006, 03:46 PM
Lok-tar?
:ninja:

ShadowDemen
03-03-2006, 04:55 PM
It can't be lok-tar, hes already been banned twice. BTW, has anyone noticed that calling someone Lok-tar is like the ultimate insult? Back on topis, I think that capitilization should help the story, as well as seperating it into paragraphs.

valerion
03-03-2006, 05:55 PM
It can't be lok-tar, hes already been banned twice. BTW, has anyone noticed that calling someone Lok-tar is like the ultimate insult? Back on topis, I think that capitilization should help the story, as well as seperating it into paragraphs.

lol

Nehemia
03-03-2006, 08:00 PM
once there was a legendary evil human assasin, who was hated by everyone... he had a house in the highlands and worked all day as a farmer.
"Danm these swams of bugs, always eating my crops, this is the last time its going to happen, im moving to the city." so he migrated to a big city with all of the stuff he had. he worked outside of the city as a lumberjack, one day he found a mystical glowing sword... then he heard someone approach behind him "who are you" said the lumberjack, the man replied "your life will end now, you are the one who stole my mystical sword" the lumberjack replied "i did not steal it here you can have it if you want!! dont kill me please i will do anything" the man replied "it is too late you will die NOW!!!" the lumberjack reacted to stick his magical sword out to defend himself, one second later the man who was trying to kill the lumberjack was dead, he had been caught on the sword that peirced through his stomache. the man went back to the city and told his story. soon the king their heard about what he had done and hierd him to be an assasin (hit-man) for him. the man could not refuse. the king asked of his name and he replied, i have many names farmer, lumberjack, or just Muriadin. the king replied "muriadin ehh? Ok muriadin i need you to go to the city of Astrius, which is 3miles north of us and assasinate the king their, the man accepted.

Ok so pretty much this is a story about a human farmer who goes to the city and finds a job as a lumbrjack, finds a magical sword and kills an assasin with it. he goes back to the city and gets a job as a hit-man(assasin) for the king of the city, now he has to leave for a quest to kill the king of the rival city of the one he is in.

Well, I cannot say this is bad.
One thing that bothers me nowdays is the role-players who create too "heroic characters".
Well, nice begin. Are you going to continue the story?

LilWower44
03-04-2006, 04:10 PM
forgot (OPEN RP) u guys can finish it if u want :)

UtbildadNinja
03-13-2006, 08:26 PM
forgot (OPEN RP) u guys can finish it if u want :)

Dont end the story ^^ make it atleast 50Pages long ^^

On the road to the rival city he meets a man whit a horse. Hello says the man. Muriadin takes some time to answear... and suddly a bit of his sword shows. The man takes some stepsbackward... Please dont kill me the man begs, I will do anything! Here take my horse! ... to be continued...

So basicly he got a horse now ^^