Lipadoza
04-06-2009, 02:26 AM
This is a lil story i wrote, tho my english is far from perfect i did my best. I hope you enjoy it :)
The Unseen
It was a dark stormy night, I pull my hood over my head as I exit the latenight store. Once outside I start to walk back home in a fast pace, it is raining hard and soon you were completely soaked and cold, while walking I start ponder about my caraccident. The doctors said you I was lucky to have survived the crash with just a few minor scratches, but ever since the caraccident I have been seeing things… lost in my toughts I get bumped aside, looking up I see a small shade running away and shooting into the alley, altough it was storming I could’ve sworn I heard a little girl crying…I decide to follow her, increasing my pace I run after her into the alley.I can now clearly hear someone crying in a dark corner of the alley, I take your camera-phone out of my pocket and turn on the flash option, approaching the dark corner I shine the light on it. There she is a small little girl in a white torn dress, her long black hair hanging in front of her face completely soaked. She is holding a brown teddybear missing a eye, as you approach her with your light she stops crying and lifts her head… it is as if my heart stops beating and time stood still, where her eyes are supposed to be there are empty gaping holes, and deep scratch wounds around the eye sockets as if they were ripped out with sharp claws by force. Shocked I fall backwards and drop my phone, my heart beating at an alarming rate I grab my phone and aim it at the corner… noone there… as if she just vanished. I stand up and start to run home as fast as I could, when I open the front door I discover there was noone there.I walk trough the hallway and search for the light switch, I flip it… no light. I grab my phone again shining light in the hallway… I get shocked once again seeing traces of blood coming from the livingroom going trough the hallway to the bedroom… gathering the little courage I have left I enter the bed room, the bloodtraces lead to the closet. As I open the door my world falls apart… inside the closet hangs the corpse of my mother and father… their eyes have been taken out and their cloths are torn, there is blood everywhere…there are marking on them saying “Unseen” I take a step backward and sit down on the bed… I hang your head and close my eyes hoping this was all just a nightmare. Then I suddenly hear a noise in the living room, shocked I lift up my head. Standing up I walk to the living room, My whole body is shaking… tears are running down my face… entering the living room it seems like there is nothing there. Then out of the shadows something rushes towards me pressing me against the wall, its claws are choking me… I start to lose conciousness as I see something else approaching… then everything turns black.
The Unseen
It was a dark stormy night, I pull my hood over my head as I exit the latenight store. Once outside I start to walk back home in a fast pace, it is raining hard and soon you were completely soaked and cold, while walking I start ponder about my caraccident. The doctors said you I was lucky to have survived the crash with just a few minor scratches, but ever since the caraccident I have been seeing things… lost in my toughts I get bumped aside, looking up I see a small shade running away and shooting into the alley, altough it was storming I could’ve sworn I heard a little girl crying…I decide to follow her, increasing my pace I run after her into the alley.I can now clearly hear someone crying in a dark corner of the alley, I take your camera-phone out of my pocket and turn on the flash option, approaching the dark corner I shine the light on it. There she is a small little girl in a white torn dress, her long black hair hanging in front of her face completely soaked. She is holding a brown teddybear missing a eye, as you approach her with your light she stops crying and lifts her head… it is as if my heart stops beating and time stood still, where her eyes are supposed to be there are empty gaping holes, and deep scratch wounds around the eye sockets as if they were ripped out with sharp claws by force. Shocked I fall backwards and drop my phone, my heart beating at an alarming rate I grab my phone and aim it at the corner… noone there… as if she just vanished. I stand up and start to run home as fast as I could, when I open the front door I discover there was noone there.I walk trough the hallway and search for the light switch, I flip it… no light. I grab my phone again shining light in the hallway… I get shocked once again seeing traces of blood coming from the livingroom going trough the hallway to the bedroom… gathering the little courage I have left I enter the bed room, the bloodtraces lead to the closet. As I open the door my world falls apart… inside the closet hangs the corpse of my mother and father… their eyes have been taken out and their cloths are torn, there is blood everywhere…there are marking on them saying “Unseen” I take a step backward and sit down on the bed… I hang your head and close my eyes hoping this was all just a nightmare. Then I suddenly hear a noise in the living room, shocked I lift up my head. Standing up I walk to the living room, My whole body is shaking… tears are running down my face… entering the living room it seems like there is nothing there. Then out of the shadows something rushes towards me pressing me against the wall, its claws are choking me… I start to lose conciousness as I see something else approaching… then everything turns black.